Topic sentence: Confident lie
Explanation: When you tell lies, it can make you more confident.
Example A: A lot of women like to wear high heels because it can make their fitness looks better and taller.
Example B: Some man will exaggerate who is brave. For instance, a man who is called Leo, always told people that he was very rich. Actually, he just wants everybody know him and make friends with him.
Topic sentence: bad lie
Explanation: When you tell a lie, you maybe hurt someone.
Example A: One day, a little boy had a test, but he didn’t prepare well. When his teacher gives him a test paper, he didn’t know how to write them. Therefore, he decided to peep other people. Finally, he got high grades.
Example B: A man was so selfish. He wanted to be a rich man. He used to illegal business to earn money, but his produce damage people’s health.
I like the confident lie that you came up with. Very nice. Yet, I have a question about Example A for confident lie. Is wearing heels lying? It is not really so logic, is it?
回覆刪除Also, the second one, which is the bad lie, doesn't seem to match the topic "good lies." Would you consider revising it?