2009年12月12日 星期六
Backpacking travel and Tour travel trip
There are two ways to travel. One is backpacking travel and two is tour travel trip. The first, some people enjoy backpacking travel. They enjoy planning by themselves like where will they go, what will they choose about transportation. The other people like tour travel trip. They just prepare their luggage. These people always travel together. They will make travel agent to plan the project. In general, backpacking travel is cheaper than tour travel trip because the former don't pay money to travel agent. The second, people are always being independent like backpacking travel because they have to provide against any dangerous things. In your journey, maybe you will lose in stranger city or different culture in variety of countries. If you go tour travel trip with agent, they will tell you what problems you will have. Therefore, you can save a lot of troubles. The third, some travel agent will make you to buy local food or souvenirs. And the other one, in order to prevent from buying expensive presents and save money to go other spots. No matter what do you like, I think you will be happy in different ways to travel. You just take care of yourself and respect local culture. I believe you will have a great time in your trip
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Good to see you hand in your assignment so promptly. :) I can tell you list some differences between backpacking travel and tour travel trip; however, this journal can be improved by adding a discussion about similarities between these two types of traveling.
回覆刪除Regarding your grammar, here are some advices.
You can't say "the first,...the second..., the third...and the other one". They are grammatically inaccurate. You may like to say "firstly,...secondly...thirdly...and finally."
Check the usage of 'make' in line 6 from the bottom, please.
Also, you need to learn the use of 'indirect questions'. Almost none of the indirect questioins you use is right. Here is a link that may help you with the concepts of indirect questions: http://www.speakspeak.com/html/d10h002_english_grammar_forming_indirect_questions.htm